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Article Selection

Please list articles that you're considering for your Wikipedia assignment below. Begin to critique these articles and find relevant sources.

Option 1

Slime

Article Evaluation

Does not exist

Sources

https://www.cnet.com/home/smart-home/everything-you-need-to-know-about-slime/

https://www.cnet.com/home/smart-home/everything-you-need-to-know-about-slime/

https://www.thoughtco.com/slime-science-how-it-works-608232

https://www.vice.com/en/article/pgxg39/we-talked-to-instagrams-most-popular-slimers

https://www.vice.com/en/article/pgxg39/we-talked-to-instagrams-most-popular-slimers

https://www.postsouth.com/news/20190522/everything-you-wanted-to-know-about-slime-but-didnt-want-to-ask-kid

https://www.forbes.com/sites/katetalbot/2019/01/27/how-slime-queen-karina-garcia-dominated-youtube-to-launch-an-empire/?sh=365fb8d449ee

https://www.refinery29.com/en-us/2020/03/8995792/slime-instagram-gen-z-trend

https://www.nytimes.com/2017/06/23/business/smallbusiness/homemade-slime-becomes-big-business.html

https://www.reddit.com/r/OutOfTheLoop/comments/69n7sb/whats_with_the_slime/

https://www.highsnobiety.com/p/slime-trend/

Option 2

Article title

MDMA-assisted psychotherapy

Article Evaluation

No accounts on the history of why MDMA was not used as a treatment for PTSD

Understates the urgency of MDMA's effectiveness -- does not compare to effectiveness of therapy alone or drugs to treat PTSD

Sources

Belsher, B. E., Tiet, Q. Q., Garvert, D. W., & Rosen, C. S. (2012). Compensation and treatment

Disability benefits and outcomes of US Veterans receiving residential PTSD treatment. Journal of Traumatic Stress, 25(5), 494–502. https://doi.org/10.1002/jts.21747 Berger, W., Mendlowicz, M. V., Marques-Portella, C., Kinrys, G., Fontenelle, L. F., Marmar, C. R., & Figueira, I. (2009). Pharmacologic alternatives to antidepressants in posttraumatic stress disorder: A systematic review. Progress in Neuro-Psychopharmacology & Biological Psychiatry, 33(2), 169–180. https://doi.org/10.1016/j.pnpbp.2008.12.004 Dennis, P. A., Dennis, N. M., Van Voorhees, E. E., Calhoun, P. S., Dennis, M. F., & Beckham, J. C. (2017). Moral transgression during the Vietnam War: a path analysis of the psychological impact of veterans’ involvement in wartime atrocities. Anxiety, Stress & Coping, 30(2), 188–201. https://doi.org/10.1080/10615806.2016.1230669 Galenza, B. (2019). Unpublished lectures. G.P.R.C. H. Javidi, M. Yadollahie. (2012). Post-traumatic Stress Disorder. The international journal of occupational and environmental medicine. Retrieved from: http://www.theijoem.com/ijoem/index.php/ijoem/article/view/127/247 Mithoefer, M. (2014). Can ecstasy treat the agony of PTSD? Science, 345(6192), 22–23. https://doi.org/10.1126/science.345.6192.22 Mott, J. M., Mondragon, S., Hundt, N. E., Beason, S. M., Grady, R. H., & Teng, E. J. (2014). Characteristics of U.S. Veterans Who Begin and Complete Prolonged Exposure and Cognitive Processing Therapy for PTSD. Journal of Traumatic Stress, 27(3), 265–273. https://doi.org/10.1002/jts.21927 National Center for PTSD, U.S. Department of Veterans Affairs. (2019). DSM-5 Criteria For PTSD. Brainline. Retrieved from: https://www.brainline.org/article/dsm-5-criteria-ptsd PERRY, J. (2016). Mending Invisible Wounds: The Efficacy and Legality of Mdma-Assisted Psychotherapy in United States’ Veterans Suffering with Post-Traumatic Stress Disorder. Journal of Law & Health, 29(2), 272–301. Retrieved from http://ezproxy.agpc.talonline.ca/login?url=https://search.ebscohost.com/login.aspx?direct=true&db=a9h&AN=124559114&site=ehost-live&scope=site

https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Prolonged_exposure_therapy https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Cognitive_processing_therapy

Option 3

Article title

Jack (Mass Effect)

Article Evaluation

Could use better writing in the descriptions.

Sources

Mass Effect 2

Mass effect 3

Option 4

Article title

She-Ra

Article Evaluation

Very few links to source in biography descriptions.

Limited discussion of impact of lesbian romance.

Sources

The show itself

Option 5

Article title

The Wake of the Lorelei Lee

Article Evaluation

Summary needs to be hugely cut down

Character list needs to be formalized and made more comprehensive

Could add citations to real events and real characters

Find more reliable sources to cite sentences

Could add component about novel's reception

Sources

The book itself

Sources on the Chinese Pirate Queen

Sources on the exportation of British criminals to Australia

Sources on reviews of the novel