User:Sfatima 12/Comparison of bipolar disorder and schizophrenia/Hannahchaise Peer Review

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General info[edit]

Whose work are you reviewing?

Sfatima12

Link to draft you're reviewing
https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Sfatima%2012/Comparison_of_bipolar_disorder_and_schizophrenia?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template
Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
Comparison of bipolar disorder and schizophrenia

Evaluate the drafted changes[edit]

  • Great job on your contributions!
  • The lead has been updated to reflect new content added, as well as added a strong and concise introductory sentence.
  • Content that has been added is extremely relevant to the topic.
  • None of the article seems biased in towards a specific position.
  • No grammatical or spelling errors, information is also well organized into a specific section.
  • The article, so far, has great flow and is easy to follow.
  • Only thing to notice would be the use of secondary literature instead of primary literature.