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Article Selection[edit]

Please list articles that you're considering for your Wikipedia assignment below. Begin to critique these articles and find relevant sources.

Article title: Gatekeeping (communication) - Gatekeeping (communication)
Article Evaluation

- opening line should mention how gatekeeping is also used in large media cooperations: -opening line should mention how gatekeeping is also used in large media cooperations; - some of the information in the first paragraph can be taken out or re done as it doesn't flow well together; - there should also be a section for "gatekeeping found in big cooperations" or where ever else its found, not just social media; - the five criteria of choosing a new story section doesn't make sense; - The last paragraph has no sources and could be longer
Sources: https://web-p-ebscohost-com.proxy.bib.uottawa.ca/ehost/detail/detail?vid=0&sid=3c2a7437-1f23-45d2-b08d-7ebfc0fc3d0f%40redis&bdata=JnNpdGU9ZWhvc3QtbGl2ZQ%3d%3d#AN=153809523&db=cms; https://go-gale-com.proxy.bib.uottawa.ca/ps/i.do?p=AONE&u=otta77973&id=GALE%7CA409236079&v=2.1&it=r

Article title: Visual communication - Visual communication
Article Evaluation: - the opening paragraph could use more examples of visual communication, it could also be broke down more; - another section could be added.. maybe about the history?; - more visuals could be added since its an article about visual communication; -more sources; - there is no conclusion section- needs to be added; - all the sections that are listed needs to be more in depth
Sources: https://www.proquest.com/docview/2308368404?OpenUrlRefId=info:xri/sid:primo&accountid=14701; https://web-s-ebscohost-com.proxy.bib.uottawa.ca/ehost/detail/detail?vid=0&sid=7c97de9c-1ccd-4616-87e7-60edf5da55f0%40redis&bdata=JnNpdGU9ZWhvc3QtbGl2ZQ%3d%3d#AN=142856745&db=a9h

Article title: Face-to-face interaction- Face-to-face interaction
Article Evaluation: - the opening paragraph could include more of an explanation of what it is or reworded to help better understand; -the article is very all put together, meaning how it could be separated more; - needs more sections; - maybe include a section about the mental health aspects of needing face to face communication; -more sources could be added; - no conclusion section- the ending paragraph is under the "cross multi-cultures" section; - everything is very short- the paragraphs need more explaining
Sources: https://link-springer-com.proxy.bib.uottawa.ca/article/10.1007/s12254-020-00636-7; https://www-sciencedirect-com.proxy.bib.uottawa.ca/science/article/pii/S0747563216307452