User:Danielle Bellamy/Herpesviral encephalitis/JacobWhite28 Peer Review

Peer review

Complete your peer review exercise below, providing as much constructive criticism as possible. The more detailed suggestions you provide, the more useful it will be to your classmate. Make sure you consider each of the following aspects:

Lead

Guiding questions:

Has the Lead been updated to reflect the new content added by your peer?
Does the Lead include an introductory sentence that concisely and clearly describes the article's topic?
Does the Lead include a brief description of the article's major sections?
Does the Lead include information that is not present in the article?
Is the Lead concise or is it overly detailed?

Content

Guiding questions:

Is the content added relevant to the topic?
Is the content added up-to-date?
Is there content that is missing or content that does not belong?
Does the article deal with one of Wikipedia's equity gaps? Does it address topics related to historically underrepresented populations or topics?

Tone and Balance

Guiding questions:

Is the content added neutral?
Are there any claims that appear heavily biased toward a particular position?
Are there viewpoints that are overrepresented, or underrepresented?
Does the content added attempt to persuade the reader in favor of one position or away from another?

Sources and References

Guiding questions:

Is all new content backed up by a reliable secondary source of information?
Does the content accurately reflect what the cited sources say? (You'll need to refer to the sources to check this.)
Are the sources thorough - i.e. Do they reflect the available literature on the topic?
Are the sources current?
Are the sources written by a diverse spectrum of authors? Do they include historically marginalized individuals where possible?
Are there better sources available, such as peer-reviewed articles in place of news coverage or random websites? (You may need to do some digging to answer this.)
Check a few links. Do they work?

Organization

Guiding questions:

Is the content added well-written - i.e. Is it concise, clear, and easy to read?
Does the content added have any grammatical or spelling errors?
Is the content added well-organized - i.e. broken down into sections that reflect the major points of the topic?

Images and Media

Guiding questions: If your peer added images or media

Does the article include images that enhance understanding of the topic?
Are images well-captioned?
Do all images adhere to Wikipedia's copyright regulations?
Are the images laid out in a visually appealing way?

For New Articles Only

If the draft you're reviewing is for a new article, consider the following in addition to the above.

Does the article meet Wikipedia's Notability requirements - i.e. Is the article supported by 2-3 reliable secondary sources independent of the subject?
How exhaustive is the list of sources? Does it accurately represent all available literature on the subject?
Does the article follow the patterns of other similar articles - i.e. contain any necessary infoboxes, section headings, and any other features contained within similar articles?
Does the article link to other articles so it is more discoverable?

Overall impressions

Guiding questions:

Has the content added improved the overall quality of the article - i.e. Is the article more complete?
What are the strengths of the content added?
How can the content added be improved?

Examples of good feedback

A good article evaluation can take a number of forms. The most essential things are to clearly identify the biggest shortcomings, and provide specific guidance on how the article can be improved.

Peer review of "Homemaking"
Peer review of this article about a famous painting

Additional Resources

Check out the Editing Wikipedia PDF for general editing tips and suggestions.

General info[edit]

Whose work are you reviewing?

Danielle Bellamy

Link to draft you're reviewing
User:Danielle Bellamy/Herpesviral encephalitis
Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
Herpes simplex encephalitis

Evaluate the drafted changes[edit]

For the lead I think you should expand more on what Herpesviral encephalitis is, as a clear definition is not given, instead I think your lead sentence should be in its own section such as epidemiology or something of that nature since the information is good and it is helpful to know which type effects which populations. For the signs and symptoms section, I recommend citing a source for the initial symptoms of the disease since you give a list of symptoms but it feels like it was just pulled out of the blue. The sources you currently have are good as they are all scholarly in nature, I recommend adding more information for how the disease is spread and the types of transmission as the article gives the scientific modes of transmission but it does not specify the specific act in which is spreads from human to human. If possible, it would also be nice to add a section talking about the cultural modes of the disease and the history of what it was thought to be in antiquity. Your sentences are structured well, however they do not really seem to have much organization and so creating a more thorough outline of what you want to add might be helpful as it might add more structure to what you want to add. If possible, it might also be good to add a graphic of the issue and where the virus is most endemic to. Overall you have a good start and it is clear that you are able to effectively utilize sources to back your information, just need to add more things at this point.