Talk:Gisele Yashar/GA1
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Reviewer: Ssven2 (talk · contribs) 08:26, 20 January 2018 (UTC)
I will review this article. Thank you. — Ssven2 Looking at you, kid 08:26, 20 January 2018 (UTC)
- Comments
- "Yashar and Lue are shown as living together in" — "Yashar and Lue are living together in"
- "Gadot was cast by American director Justin Lin; the actress explained that she was cast due to her background in the military" — Avoid repetition of "cast".
- Some of the references mention the work and publisher names (reference nos 7, 8, 9, 10, 14 and 16). Others (reference nos 1, 6, 11, 12, 13, 15, 17, 18 and 19) do not. Be consistent with that.
Good work, Aoba47. A neat, little article. Address the above comments and the article is promoted. — Ssven2 Looking at you, kid 09:37, 20 January 2018 (UTC)
GA review – see WP:WIAGA for criteria
- Is it reasonably well written?
- Is it factually accurate and verifiable?
- A. Has an appropriate reference section:
- B. Citation to reliable sources where necessary:
- C. No original research:
- A. Has an appropriate reference section:
- Is it broad in its coverage?
- A. Major aspects:
- B. Focused:
- A. Major aspects:
- Is it neutral?
- Fair representation without bias:
- Fair representation without bias:
- Is it stable?
- No edit wars, etc:
- No edit wars, etc:
- Does it contain images to illustrate the topic?
- A. Images are tagged with their copyright status, and valid fair use rationales are provided for non-free content:
- B. Images are provided if possible and are relevant to the topic, and have suitable captions:
- A. Images are tagged with their copyright status, and valid fair use rationales are provided for non-free content:
- Overall: Passed, my queries were met and solved by the nominator.
- Pass or Fail:
- Pass or Fail:
Anyhow, it is a minor query and can be dealt with post GA. Great job, Aoba47. Keep up the good work. — Ssven2 Looking at you, kid 15:49, 20 January 2018 (UTC)