User contributions for Pedro Tor
A user with 441 edits. Account created on 30 January 2013.
20 May 2024
- 05:3305:33, 20 May 2024 diff hist −7 m Pope Adrian I →Franks: remove repeated reference in the same sentence current
15 February 2024
- 01:5501:55, 15 February 2024 diff hist +2 m Knox Goes Away →Production: Missing "a"
27 October 2023
- 02:5702:57, 27 October 2023 diff hist −3 m Alex Proyas →Other ventures: Grammar, tense
9 August 2023
- 05:1405:14, 9 August 2023 diff hist −4 m Wonka (film) Long sentences such as this one need careful attention to grammar to make sense. The word "was" unnecessary and grammatically out of order. So I deleted it.
- 05:1005:10, 9 August 2023 diff hist +1 m Wonka (film) →Production: fixing some grammar howlers.
21 July 2023
- 01:4501:45, 21 July 2023 diff hist +4 m Laser Ranging Retroreflector missing word
10 July 2023
- 05:5605:56, 10 July 2023 diff hist +12 m Jacki Weaver Correcting a number of grammatical errors.
9 March 2023
- 09:3109:31, 9 March 2023 diff hist 0 m Hubert Conway Rees →Early life and career: corrected typo
5 December 2022
- 01:1101:11, 5 December 2022 diff hist +1 m Bernard Pitt →Early life and career: Missing [ inserted
15 August 2022
- 06:1106:11, 15 August 2022 diff hist −5 m Cetinje massacre →Aftermath: deleted word "mass" as it was otiose given the next word is "massacres"
- 06:1006:10, 15 August 2022 diff hist −1 m Cetinje massacre →Massacre: grammar correction
24 May 2022
- 23:5723:57, 24 May 2022 diff hist +4 m An Inconvenient Truth →In New Zealand: missing word
8 May 2022
- 08:5908:59, 8 May 2022 diff hist −1 m Ghost Rider (2007 film) →Filming: Typographical error
28 April 2022
- 01:3501:35, 28 April 2022 diff hist −1 m East of the Mountains →Adaptations: Typo
29 March 2022
- 03:1303:13, 29 March 2022 diff hist +18 m Denzel Washington →2020s: added a major nomination.
28 March 2022
- 08:1108:11, 28 March 2022 diff hist 0 m Daniel F. Bakeman →Post-war: typo
2 March 2022
- 23:0323:03, 2 March 2022 diff hist 0 m Willemstad →History: UNESCO is not a word, it is an acronym.
- 23:0023:00, 2 March 2022 diff hist +4 m Plaza Hotel Curaçao →Hart Group: Grammatical errors
27 February 2022
- 00:2300:23, 27 February 2022 diff hist −4 m Louis Micheels House →Demolition: Removal of otiose and grammatically incorrect "the"
22 February 2022
- 03:4203:42, 22 February 2022 diff hist −14 m Appointment with Venus (film) →Basis: In the same sentence there is both a reference to "a real incident" and to "a similar event" whereas they are one and the same, hence repetitive.
11 February 2022
- 03:3503:35, 11 February 2022 diff hist +2 m HMAS Pirie (J189) →Repairs and mutiny: Correcting wrong tense.
- 03:3403:34, 11 February 2022 diff hist +9 m HMAS Pirie (J189) →Repairs and mutiny: Numbers should be spelt when appearing at the start of a sentence.
- 03:3003:30, 11 February 2022 diff hist +13 m HMAS Pirie (J189) →Repairs and mutiny: Correcting grammatical errors and missing word.
- 03:2103:21, 11 February 2022 diff hist +14 m HMAS Pirie (J189) →Oro Bay: "Seven were killed ..." is merely repeating what was said in the previous paragraph.
- 03:1803:18, 11 February 2022 diff hist −1 m HMAS Pirie (J189) →Oro Bay: wrong tense
10 February 2022
- 22:2022:20, 10 February 2022 diff hist +187 m Jacki Weaver Two nonsensical sentences were edited to make sense. Also, the reference to her Yellowstone role was random at best, so two main, earlier, roles also on US TV were added. Combined, a new paragraph was created to differentiate those roles from her Australian roles.
30 January 2022
- 21:5921:59, 30 January 2022 diff hist 0 m The Great (TV series) →Season 2 (2021): consistency
- 21:5821:58, 30 January 2022 diff hist +4 m The Great (TV series) →Season 2 (2021): missing word
21 January 2022
- 07:3807:38, 21 January 2022 diff hist 0 m Kanchan Prava Devi →Life: Spelling error
18 January 2022
- 12:3812:38, 18 January 2022 diff hist −21 m Pastures of the Blue Crane →Television: Not so recent any more.
13 January 2022
- 21:4421:44, 13 January 2022 diff hist −1 Against the Ice →Production
- 21:4321:43, 13 January 2022 diff hist +18 Against the Ice The book "Two Against the Ice" is not a novel, but a work of nonfiction, ie a true story. The article cited as authority for the "novel" statement is itself wrong, but it correctly refers to the story as being true elsewhere in the article. Look at the Wikipedia page of the author and the fact his book is nonfiction becomes obvious
21 December 2021
- 00:2900:29, 21 December 2021 diff hist 0 m Rankin Inlet →History: "in the island" replaced with "on the island"
30 November 2021
- 22:4922:49, 30 November 2021 diff hist +2 m Chios expedition →Initial campaign: missing word
- 22:3722:37, 30 November 2021 diff hist +3 m Battle of Sinop →Prelude: missing word
24 October 2021
- 07:1807:18, 24 October 2021 diff hist 0 m A Voyage to Terra Australis →Circumnavigation: Wrong year of departure from Sydney. The correct year is 1802. Flinders did not set sail from England until July 1801, and did not sight western Australia until December 1801.
30 September 2021
- 01:3601:36, 30 September 2021 diff hist +26 m 2001 Summer Universiade Correcting bad grammar.
- 01:3001:30, 30 September 2021 diff hist −6 m Zhang Shangwu →Life in the streets: Removal of obsolete word
29 September 2021
- 11:4211:42, 29 September 2021 diff hist +5 m Kenneth Dewar →"The Royal Oak Mutiny": missing word
- 11:3511:35, 29 September 2021 diff hist +2 m Roger Keyes, 1st Baron Keyes →Inter-war years: missing word
28 September 2021
- 08:3508:35, 28 September 2021 diff hist −1 m Throne of Blood →Critical reception: grammar and removal of erroneous quotation mark
27 September 2021
- 04:0104:01, 27 September 2021 diff hist −5 m Princess Hayu →Professional experience: "then" is otiose given the sentence begins with "Following".
- 04:0004:00, 27 September 2021 diff hist +21 m Princess Hayu →Marriage: "the last one" is an inappropriate term to us was it is absent any specificity, i.e. "one" what?
- 03:5803:58, 27 September 2021 diff hist +19 m Princess Hayu →Marriage: Multiple grammatical errors
- 03:5103:51, 27 September 2021 diff hist +2 m Princess Hayu →Early life: Fixing multiple grammatical errors, including wrong tense, singular instead of plural.
- 03:4803:48, 27 September 2021 diff hist +8 m Princess Hayu missing word "the" twice.
23 September 2021
- 02:4102:41, 23 September 2021 diff hist −10 m Michael Sumpter →Death, investigation and exposure
- 02:4102:41, 23 September 2021 diff hist −19 m Michael Sumpter →Crimes: There are seven uses of the word "would be" instead of stating "was". "would be" denotes future tense and refers to an uncertain fact. "was" is the correct tense and gives certainty.
21 September 2021
- 01:2601:26, 21 September 2021 diff hist +4 m Kaludah →Salvage and Kamiri: wrong tense, and "says" replaced with "stated"
- 01:1901:19, 21 September 2021 diff hist 0 m Kaludah →Service history: wrong tense
