User contributions for Mark83
A user with 24,597 edits. Account created on 16 April 2005.
27 May 2024
- 07:5407:54, 27 May 2024 diff hist −23 Greggs Undid revision 1225631984 by TempoaryAcc (talk) That's irrelevant to the subject of this article current Tag: Undo
- 07:5207:52, 27 May 2024 diff hist −675 Forestside Shopping Centre Removing a lot of last two edits - the Belfast Telegraph article doesn't mention Forestside, being entirely focused on Odyssey. And the Belfast Live one talks about what locals are speculating - that's not reliable information. Please don't add references for the appearance of providing reliable sources when you are not doing so. current
24 May 2024
- 08:3808:38, 24 May 2024 diff hist +625 Talk:Northrop Grumman E-8 Joint STARS Oppose
20 May 2024
- 15:4515:45, 20 May 2024 diff hist −27 m Marconi Electronic Systems →History: tweak current Tag: Visual edit
- 10:4910:49, 20 May 2024 diff hist −31 m CAMM (missile family) →United Kingdom: trim Tag: Visual edit
- 10:4810:48, 20 May 2024 diff hist −209 CAMM (missile family) →British Army: Rmvd "In 2023, reports emerged suggesting that investment had begun towards acquiring additional launchers, a new medium range radar, as well as the potential procurement of CAMM-ER for Sky Sabre" because source is some random guy spouting theories on Twitter Tag: Visual edit
14 May 2024
- 10:0510:05, 14 May 2024 diff hist −396 Unmanned underwater vehicle →Manta ray: Remove POV/promo-like language Tag: Visual edit
- 10:0110:01, 14 May 2024 diff hist −916 Northrop Grumman Undid last. Written like a news article, not an encyclopedia article (e.g. "bears a striking resemblance to its oceanic namesake"). " is intended to revolutionize intelligence gathering methods with its silent and stealthy operations" and "a testament to the technical advancements in UUV technology" are POV - written like Wikipedia is astounded at Northrop's prowess! And the source doesn't say it's subject TO electromagnetic radiation. Tag: Undo
13 May 2024
- 11:2711:27, 13 May 2024 diff hist +88 CAMM (missile family) +Excessive citations inline
- 11:2511:25, 13 May 2024 diff hist +38 CAMM (missile family) Excessive citations template
- 11:2111:21, 13 May 2024 diff hist −213 Spin (propaganda) →Examples of "spin doctors": "Campbell trusted various journalists such as Tony Bevins and Denis Murray, with whom he had a close relationship, to write stories about Blair in a positive light;" is wholly inappopriate without a reference. Don't know anything about the former, but Denis Murray was a major BBC correspondent who I don't feel it's fair to say but a positive spin on Blair-related events current Tag: Visual edit
- 09:4809:48, 13 May 2024 diff hist −240 Peter Mandelson →Peerage and return to Cabinet as Business Secretary: Some tidyup. Reduced number of headings (some for tiny paragraphs). Also not appropriate to define his post-government career according to the tenure of Labour leaders when he has no official role in these leaderships. Tag: Visual edit
- 09:4109:41, 13 May 2024 diff hist −583 Queen Elizabeth-class aircraft carrier →Availability for service: Why include a table that is mostly empty - the editor who added this couldn't be bothered finding sources for the rest of the data? Tag: Visual edit
- 08:2808:28, 13 May 2024 diff hist +427 Talk:Queen Elizabeth-class aircraft carrier →Program criticism: Reply current Tag: Reply
9 May 2024
- 18:1018:10, 9 May 2024 diff hist +957 McLaren MCL35 Undid last. I don't understand most of these changes and no edit summary to clarify. Doesn't feel like an improvement. Tag: Undo
- 18:0918:09, 9 May 2024 diff hist −99 Northern Ireland Region of Shopping Centres Deadlink current
- 08:4008:40, 9 May 2024 diff hist −9 Boeing Chinook (UK variants) →Operational history: toned this down a bit current Tag: Visual edit
- 08:3508:35, 9 May 2024 diff hist −42 Boeing Chinook (UK variants) Article far too messy with pictures alone, so integrating this quotebox into text
- 08:3208:32, 9 May 2024 diff hist −1,553 Boeing Chinook (UK variants) →Operational history: Remove repetition and some very stubby paragraphs (i.e. a sentence or two). The Mull of Kintyre crash better described well in one place than poorly in two places. Tag: Visual edit
- 08:2408:24, 9 May 2024 diff hist +63 Boeing Chinook (UK variants) →Chinnok ER: tidyup of a messy section Tag: Visual edit
29 April 2024
- 10:1510:15, 29 April 2024 diff hist −21 Northern Ireland Electricity →Northern Ireland Electricity Service (NIES): No need for this kind of legal minutiae here. If it was an article on the order itself, yes. Tag: Visual edit
26 April 2024
- 21:0321:03, 26 April 2024 diff hist −283 UK Defence Journal Undid last - source used is also a bit of self-promotion by UKDJ current Tag: Undo
18 April 2024
- 08:2708:27, 18 April 2024 diff hist −1,197 Talk:London Stock Exchange Revert. This is an article about the company, unaffiliated to the company. If you have an issue with the company, take it up with the company. current Tag: Manual revert
17 April 2024
- 20:0220:02, 17 April 2024 diff hist −337 Kennedy Centre, Belfast Remove nonsense current Tag: Manual revert
11 April 2024
- 16:5916:59, 11 April 2024 diff hist −55 Kennedy Centre, Belfast →Sainsbury's: companies are singular Tag: Visual edit
- 16:4516:45, 11 April 2024 diff hist +3 Tribeca Belfast →Development history: some tidyup - small paragraphs made it a hard read Tag: Visual edit
- 16:3916:39, 11 April 2024 diff hist −67 Template:Shopping centres in Northern Ireland This appears to be defunct current
- 16:3616:36, 11 April 2024 diff hist −1,597 Northern Ireland Region of Shopping Centres The only source from this was NIRSC itself. That website is defunct. And a news search shows nothing has been published in 10 years. Must be defunct Tag: Visual edit
- 16:2316:23, 11 April 2024 diff hist +286 User talk:Sir JackMarr →Using Twitter/X as a source: reply current
- 16:1816:18, 11 April 2024 diff hist −2 Weather (Apple) companies are singular Tag: Visual edit
- 10:2310:23, 11 April 2024 diff hist −2,931 Foyleside Shopping Centre WP:NOTDIRECTORY - and a floorplan from 2014 is not useful
- 10:1910:19, 11 April 2024 diff hist −15 m Forestside Shopping Centre →2000s and 2010s: minor typo Tag: Visual edit
- 10:1810:18, 11 April 2024 diff hist +69 Forestside Shopping Centre →History: subsections
- 10:1510:15, 11 April 2024 diff hist −144 Forestside Shopping Centre Cant find a source for this Tag: Visual edit
- 10:1510:15, 11 April 2024 diff hist +971 Forestside Shopping Centre →History: purchase of centre Tag: Visual edit
- 09:3809:38, 11 April 2024 diff hist −463 Forestside Shopping Centre Not that notable? Tag: Visual edit
8 April 2024
- 11:4911:49, 8 April 2024 diff hist −3 m Donna Traynor →Broadcasting career: BBC NI link current Tag: Visual edit
5 April 2024
- 22:5722:57, 5 April 2024 diff hist −50 CAMM (missile family) →Potential operators: heading trimming
- 17:4517:45, 5 April 2024 diff hist −162 CAMM (missile family) Some copyediting Tag: Visual edit
- 17:3717:37, 5 April 2024 diff hist −114 CAMM (missile family) →Failed bids: Unnecessary headings
- 17:3517:35, 5 April 2024 diff hist −137 CAMM (missile family) →Related developments: Cleanup Tag: Visual edit
- 17:3417:34, 5 April 2024 diff hist −1,096 CAMM (missile family) →Related developments: "This system is not to be conflated with CAMM" - so not a related development then!
- 17:3317:33, 5 April 2024 diff hist −174 CAMM (missile family) More heading trimming
- 17:3117:31, 5 April 2024 diff hist −42 CAMM (missile family) TOC is unwieldy - these aren't significant enough to be headings.
- 17:2917:29, 5 April 2024 diff hist −85 CAMM (missile family) →CAMM-MR (Medium-Range): Removed "The missile is expected to finish development around the mid-2030s." because the source is so vague (and self-published): "CAMM MR joint development with Poland targeting the middle 2030s" - that doesn't say finish development, that sounds like entering service. Either way, far too vague. Tags: Manual revert Visual edit
- 17:2317:23, 5 April 2024 diff hist +366 User talk:Sir JackMarr →Using Twitter/X as a source: new section Tag: New topic
3 April 2024
- 17:3117:31, 3 April 2024 diff hist −3,707 Northern Ireland Electricity →Operations: Trimmed this back to verifiable information. Citations needed for the rest Tag: Visual edit
1 April 2024
- 10:5110:51, 1 April 2024 diff hist −37 Northern Ireland Electricity Logo already displayed Tag: Visual edit
28 March 2024
- 15:3615:36, 28 March 2024 diff hist −9,554 O'Neills Removed "sponsorship" section per WP:NOTDIRECTORY. Also almost entirely unreferenced, so who's to say it's correct? current
- 11:5211:52, 28 March 2024 diff hist −115 Belfast Harbour This doesn't show what it claims - road and rail connections from Belfast because it excludes so much current
