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  • 22:0222:02, 5 October 2021 diff hist −29 m Big Buck HunterRemoved ambiguous language. The way it was phrased, it was unclear whether shooting bucks or does would cause the game to end prematurely. That it ends the turn is mentioned in the Gameplay section, anyways. Tag: Visual edit

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8 November 2020

  • 10:0310:03, 8 November 2020 diff hist −2 Nation of IslamMoving criticism to second paragraph since the lede is really long and don't want to bury it. Tag: Visual edit
  • 09:5409:54, 8 November 2020 diff hist −17 Nation of IslamCriticism and reception sections always go towards the bottom of wikipedia articles, and likewise should go towards the bottom of the lede. They at the least should not be the third and fourth sentences, before even covering the basic history of the organization. Furthermore they were place in the flow of the story about the history of the organization such that they made that story disjointed and hard to follow. Tag: Visual edit

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  • 19:2619:26, 21 July 2016 diff hist −60 InterruptBrought 'exception' to the beginning of the sentence to emphasize it. Rewrote a second sentence because it contained nested 'such as' and 'for examples' (was the purpose to illustrate or be comprehensive?). Feel free to edit again what I wrote.
  • 19:1419:14, 21 July 2016 diff hist +21 m Interruptadded internal link for trap

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26 June 2016

  • 15:5315:53, 26 June 2016 diff hist +21 Airbnbthis is part 2 of the previous edit. This way I'm combining the two sentences into one, keeping all the information in both. Also the info added in this edit is found in the reference link. Tag: Visual edit
  • 15:5215:52, 26 June 2016 diff hist −155 AirbnbDeleted a sentence which said the exact same thing as the previous sentence and was poorly worded.

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  • 21:1221:12, 4 June 2016 diff hist −5 MeshLabshouldn't have to read to end of second paragraph for definition. definition comes first in all wikipedia pages I've seen. (could improve definition, but that's a second job).

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