User contributions for Jim10701
A user with 5,100 edits. Account created on 16 April 2008.
31 August 2013
- 23:1423:14, 31 August 2013 diff hist −7,385 User:Jim10701 It's time to move on. current
- 21:5021:50, 31 August 2013 diff hist +55 Hagia Irene add "although it is not named for a human saint named Irene" to preserve sense of rmvd "erroneously" w/out its judgmental editorializing
- 21:0721:07, 31 August 2013 diff hist −12 Hagia Irene rmv unsupported editorial judgment "erroneously". The church IS called "St Irene" in English. Misleading, maybe, but "erroneous" requires reliable references. Until they can be added, it's best to rmv the editorializing and just state the fact.
- 20:3720:37, 31 August 2013 diff hist −24 Organization of the Eastern Orthodox Church →Autocephalous Archbishoprics: rmv instructional and presumptuous (and totally unnecessary) "It should be noted that..." per MOS:NOTED
- 18:2618:26, 31 August 2013 diff hist 0 John Gavin correct "John" to "Gavin" per WP:SURNAME
29 August 2013
- 12:5612:56, 29 August 2013 diff hist −37 Rothbart rmv "Melvin Rothbart, basketball player", which links to no WP article, refers to a person not mentioned anywhere else in WP, and was added by an anonymous, one-time editor from Hungary (89.132.194.35)
26 August 2013
- 10:5910:59, 26 August 2013 diff hist −56 Minx rmv "* Minx Mwahzelle : Melbourne Australia Drag performer.", which was added anonymously and contains no wikilink, nor does "Minx Mwahzelle" appear anywhere else in WP
- 10:5510:55, 26 August 2013 diff hist −61 Minx rmv redlink Minx Marketing and Category:Minx, neither of which appears anywhere else in WP and were added by an editor (Tntip) who has done nothing else
22 August 2013
- 19:5419:54, 22 August 2013 diff hist −13 Lucas Elliot Eberl →Directing career: rmv "Lucas Elliot" per WP:SURNAME: his full name has already been given in the lead section
20 August 2013
- 17:3417:34, 20 August 2013 diff hist −283 Banks Peninsula →Tourism: correct slash ("/") to "and" per WP:SLASH; rmv much peacockery ("popular"), editorializing ("cleverly and comfortably") and spam ("An interesting form of accommodation is available"), per WP:PEA, WP:OPED and WP:SPAM
- 17:2417:24, 20 August 2013 diff hist +16 m Port Levy ce: correct one spaced hyphen to {{spaced ndash}} and another to a semicolon; correct movie title format from quotation marks to italics
19 August 2013
- 20:2720:27, 19 August 2013 diff hist −12 Heavenly Creatures rmv redundant verbiage "ultimately": Academy Awards are not multi-round competitions with intermediate and then ultimate winners; rmv errant comma between subject ("film") and verb ("lost")
- 13:5513:55, 19 August 2013 diff hist +25 List of Waterloo Road characters →Past characters: add link to William Rush (actor)
- 00:3000:30, 19 August 2013 diff hist +4 Sellafield add link to Nuclear reprocessing at its first mention
18 August 2013
- 01:2501:25, 18 August 2013 diff hist −1 m U.S. Route 23 in North Carolina →Route description: correct "Ottto" to "Otto"
17 August 2013
- 15:0615:06, 17 August 2013 diff hist −415 Anything Goes →History: rmv unsupported speculative paragraph about source of title ("According to theatre legend, ..."), which has been tagged {{cn}} for more than 5½ years; add {{cn}} to Rosecliff claim; expand "RI" to "Rhode Island"
16 August 2013
- 11:0911:09, 16 August 2013 diff hist +23 Counting Crows →Origin of the name: correct lengthy (more than 40 words) inline quotation to block quotation per MOS:QUOTEMARKS#Block quotations, using {{quote}}
- 10:5510:55, 16 August 2013 diff hist −5 Counting Crows →Origin of the name: rmv inappropriate italics from quotation of lyrics per MOS:QUOTEMARKS#Italics_and_quotations: "a quotation is not italicized inside quotation marks or a block quote just because it is a quotation"
12 August 2013
- 07:5807:58, 12 August 2013 diff hist +23 Extrapulmonary chg redirect from Lung (which doesn't even contain the word "extrapulmonary") to Tuberculosis#Extrapulmonary, surely the most likely use of the term
- 07:5307:53, 12 August 2013 diff hist +32 Katherine Mansfield add link for "extrapulmonary" to Tuberculosis#Extrapulmonary
- 07:4807:48, 12 August 2013 diff hist −18 Katherine Mansfield →Meeting Murry: short story titles should be in quotes, not italics, per WP:QUOTEMARK; correct single to double quotes per MOS:QUOTEMARKS
- 07:4007:40, 12 August 2013 diff hist 0 Katherine Mansfield →Early life: correct single to double quotes on "K. Mansfield" per MOS:QUOTEMARKS
- 07:3707:37, 12 August 2013 diff hist −2 Katherine Mansfield →Early life: short story titles should be in quotes, not italics, per WP:QUOTEMARK
- 07:3607:36, 12 August 2013 diff hist −16 How Pearl Button Was Kidnapped short story titles should be in quotes, per WP:QUOTEMARK; rmv inappropriate boldface per MOS:BOLD
- 07:3107:31, 12 August 2013 diff hist −72 Katherine Mansfield →Short stories: short story titles should be in quotes, not italics, per WP:QUOTEMARK
- 07:1607:16, 12 August 2013 diff hist −61 Katherine Mansfield Undid revision 562881828 by Georgina Joysmith (talk) tied to ref I just rmvd: restore if ref restored (and add ref to caption to support claim of false ID)
- 07:0707:07, 12 August 2013 diff hist −77 Katherine Mansfield Undid revision 562880871 by Georgina Joysmith (talk) improperly formatted ref disrupts text, and I don't know how to fix it: pls restore in correct format
10 August 2013
- 11:4611:46, 10 August 2013 diff hist −2 m Richard Dawkins rmv inappropriate spaces around em dash per WP:MDASH ("Do not use spaced em dashes")
- 11:4011:40, 10 August 2013 diff hist −2 Richard Dawkins rmv inappropriate quotation marks from "meme" per WP:WORDSASWORDS: words used as words should be put in either italics or quotation marks, but not both
8 August 2013
- 19:5719:57, 8 August 2013 diff hist −1 m Ranchería correct format of block quotation, changing no content
- 15:4215:42, 8 August 2013 diff hist +1 Sharm El Sheikh correct "It's" to "It is" per MOS:N'T
- 15:3515:35, 8 August 2013 diff hist −18 Sharm El Sheikh →Name: rmv three instances of inappropriate boldface per MOS:BOLD: the normal place for using boldface is the lead section; if an editor wants to restore the boldface, these alternate names should be relocated to the lead section
- 02:5002:50, 8 August 2013 diff hist +1 m Bright Star (film) →Critical reception: ce: italicize movie title, correct curly to straight apostrophe, rmv errant space between period and quotemark
- 02:4502:45, 8 August 2013 diff hist −18 Bright Star (film) →Production: rmv editorial "rather uncommonly" per MOS:NOTED: "Do not tell readers that something is ironic, surprising, ... etc. This supplies a point of view. Simply state the sourced facts and allow readers to draw their own conclusions."
- 02:3802:38, 8 August 2013 diff hist −38 Bright Star (film) →Production: rmv absurd and presumptuous "which are as well known as his poems", a claim not supported by the cited reference—which is a blog, by the way, and therefore not a reliable source anyway
6 August 2013
- 23:2823:28, 6 August 2013 diff hist +322 Talk:Woodlawn Cemetery (Bronx, New York) →Who owns it?: new section
- 20:5820:58, 6 August 2013 diff hist −131 Breadcrumbs →Panko: correct "more airy" to "airier"; rmv unsupported sentence about rmvg crusts, since article just said panko is made from crustless bread
- 18:1618:16, 6 August 2013 diff hist +17 Charlie Ergen →Early life and education: correct "Charles" to "Ergen" per WP:SURNAME; rmv ridiculously unnecessary "former": readers don't need to be told that he doesn't still play basketball at the University of Tennessee; ce
- 18:0818:08, 6 August 2013 diff hist +10 Charlie Ergen →Personal life: add wife's nickname, rmvd from "Career" section
- 18:0718:07, 6 August 2013 diff hist −35 Charlie Ergen →Career: clean up redundancies; rmv inappropriate boldface from "EchoStar" per MOS:BOLD
- 18:0218:02, 6 August 2013 diff hist −5 Charlie Ergen ce around "China Syndrome", rmvg inappropriate colon, correcting single to double quotes per MOS:QUOTEMARKS
5 August 2013
- 18:3018:30, 5 August 2013 diff hist +48 The Best of Youth →1966 summer: rmv scare quotes from "logotherapist", expand explanation and add link
- 17:4917:49, 5 August 2013 diff hist −15 The Best of Youth →1966 summer: rmv spaces around em dash per WP:MDASH: "Do not use spaced em dashes"; correct colloquialisms: rmv "we meet", "kid" to "younger", "venture" to "go"
- 15:5915:59, 5 August 2013 diff hist −13 The Best of Youth rmv peacockish "prestigious" per WP:PEA
- 07:3707:37, 5 August 2013 diff hist −6 Mohammed VI of Morocco →Controversy: rmv inappropriate explicit (triple-apostrophe) boldface from section heading per MOS:BOLD: "the appropriate markup automatically adds the boldface formatting; do not use the explicit triple-apostrophe markup"
4 August 2013
- 18:0718:07, 4 August 2013 diff hist −940 Light-emitting diode →Low maintenance lighting: rmv section: it contains no information not covered better elsewhere in the article EXCEPT for a spam link to a commercial site; it's so badly written it's nearly incomprehensible, but spam isn't worth fixing
- 17:5717:57, 4 August 2013 diff hist +43 Light-emitting diode →Indicators and signs: rmv slash ("/") per WP:SLASH, separating the two types of radios and linking each to its WP article; correct ampersand ("&") to "and" per WP:&
- 17:4817:48, 4 August 2013 diff hist +2 Light-emitting diode →Power sources: correct slash ("/") to en dash per WP:/ and WP:NDASH
- 17:4017:40, 4 August 2013 diff hist −21 Light-emitting diode →Phosphor-based LEDs: rmv unnecessary and editorial "clearly" and inappropriate scare quotes from "white" in image caption (it IS a white LED); rmv inappropriate boldface from "phosphor-based white LEDs" per MOS:BOLD
- 17:3417:34, 4 August 2013 diff hist −2 Light-emitting diode →The blue and white LED: rmv instructional and presumptuous "note the" in image caption per MOS:NOTED
