User contributions for Jbeans
A user with 3,765 edits. Account created on 9 February 2008.
1 March 2024
- 14:1614:16, 1 March 2024 diff hist −4 Magnetic moment 'new' paragh.
- 14:1214:12, 1 March 2024 diff hist +230 Magnetic moment copy-edits: for readability by the lay reader; explicate several points & revd phrasing & word choices; change ordering of examples. ('New' pgh on hold for ease of comparing diffs),
28 February 2024
- 14:4514:45, 28 February 2024 diff hist +25 Plastid copy-edits for readability> semantics, word choices.
27 February 2024
- 22:0422:04, 27 February 2024 diff hist +23 Plastid copy-edits: cleanup
- 14:5614:56, 27 February 2024 diff hist −7 Plastid 'new' paragraph.
- 14:5114:51, 27 February 2024 diff hist +11 Plastid copy-edits for readability> correcting grammar & syntax; revised phrasing & word choice; ('New' pgh on hold for ease of comparing diffs. )
25 February 2024
- 13:4113:41, 25 February 2024 diff hist −125 Plastid 2 'new' paragraphs; deleted one pargh; emphasized contrating 'plastids'.
- 13:2813:28, 25 February 2024 diff hist +760 Plastid copy-edits for readability> revised text & phrasing as needed to clarify & simplify narrative---deleting some unclear or uncorroborated points; corrctd grammar. ('New' or deleted paragraphs on hold for ease of comparing diffs).
23 February 2024
- 15:5915:59, 23 February 2024 diff hist −11 Plastid 'New' paragraph.
- 15:5515:55, 23 February 2024 diff hist +474 Plastid copy-edits for readability> explicated: the revised findings re the shape of the plastid molecules,, and the description of chloroplasts,,and re differention & redefferention by plastids. ('New' paragraph on hold for ease of comparing diffs.)
19 February 2024
- 20:2120:21, 19 February 2024 diff hist +50 Cellular differentiation copy-edits for readability> revised words and phrasing to clarify meanings of text; deleted unneeded phrasing. [][] Image re micrograph: In order to emphasize subject= dedifferentiation, >deleted phrases describing cancer-forms, as extraneous to subject= 'dedifferentiation', stages of. Emphasized 3 stages of dedifferentiation.
17 February 2024
- 09:5809:58, 17 February 2024 diff hist +61 Plastid copy-edits for readability> revised phrasing and word choices.
15 February 2024
- 21:3421:34, 15 February 2024 diff hist +1,116 Secondary source →Classification: copy-edits for readability of section> elaborated on descriptive narrative; improved word & phrasing choices; deleted duplicative-&-adjacent uses of the same citation.
14 February 2024
- 01:3901:39, 14 February 2024 diff hist −15 Adipose tissue 2 'new' paragraphs.
- 01:3601:36, 14 February 2024 diff hist −19 Adipose tissue copy-edits for readability> recomposed lede paragraph into same /related themes of 3 paras. (Kept lede para. for ease of comparing diffs.)
13 February 2024
- 19:5619:56, 13 February 2024 diff hist +68 Palmitic acid →Occurrence and production: copy-edits for readability.
- 12:0412:04, 13 February 2024 diff hist +23 Palmitic acid copy-edits for readability, 'new' paragraph.
12 February 2024
- 15:3315:33, 12 February 2024 diff hist +4 Plastid The cited source, [Sato N (2007)], doesn't appear to explain 'organelle', as that word is not mentioned in the lede summary, nor is it listed among the keywords of the source article. OTOH, this source does explicate the theme of "intracellular endosymbiotic cyanobacteria", ie, that plastids originated as endosymbiotic cyanobacteria, and then experienced secondary (and perhaps even tertiary) endosymbiotic events of evolutionary development..
10 February 2024
- 05:5705:57, 10 February 2024 diff hist +2 Apicomplexa copy-edits, grammar
- 05:4805:48, 10 February 2024 diff hist +105 Organelle →Eukaryotic organelles: added mention of plastids including chloroplasts; 'new' paragraph.
- 05:2305:23, 10 February 2024 diff hist +36 Apicomplexa added graphic showing an apical shape.
- 04:4404:44, 10 February 2024 diff hist +14 Plastid 'new' paragraph.
- 04:4104:41, 10 February 2024 diff hist +102 Plastid added example> apicoplasts, as a plastid derived from secondary endosymbiosis.
- 04:0504:05, 10 February 2024 diff hist −18 Cell membrane →Intracellular membranes: copy-edits: grammar, formatting.
- 03:5003:50, 10 February 2024 diff hist +139 Apicomplexa copy-edits: elaborate re structure of intracellular apical membranes, et al
9 February 2024
- 16:2116:21, 9 February 2024 diff hist +71 Secondary source copy-edits for readability> word choices. rephrasing.
8 February 2024
- 20:3920:39, 8 February 2024 diff hist +199 Arthur Engoron copy-edits: elaborate re titles "judge" or "justice".
6 February 2024
- 04:4204:42, 6 February 2024 diff hist +128 Long COVID copy-edits for readability, re> phrasing and word choice.
5 February 2024
- 22:2722:27, 5 February 2024 diff hist +321 Arthur Engoron copy-edits for readability.
- 18:2318:23, 5 February 2024 diff hist −7 Arthur Engoron copy-edits for readability.
1 February 2024
- 16:5616:56, 1 February 2024 diff hist +206 Melanoma copy edits re> For the lay reader, parenthetical text --even if it's pertinent info-- clutters the first line; move it down. The link-page "ulcer (dermatology)" provides no mention of 'mole', 'melanoma', or related content. // 'New' paragraph. '
27 January 2024
- 20:5020:50, 27 January 2024 diff hist +125 Free indirect speech copy-edits: elaborated lede narrative-text; enlarged width of quoteblock.
- 20:1420:14, 27 January 2024 diff hist +89 Melanoma →UV radiation: copy-edits for readability.
- 02:5502:55, 27 January 2024 diff hist +57 Melanoma copy-edits: word choices, correctd phrasing & formating. Tag: Disambiguation links added
26 January 2024
- 20:4020:40, 26 January 2024 diff hist +2,759 Free indirect speech add subsection: elaborates re Jane Austen> early to employ the "distinguishing marks" ..of free indirect speech, before it was known or named as such.
- 15:2615:26, 26 January 2024 diff hist +2 Esophageal cancer copy-edits: 'new' para> provides higher (= un-buried) visibility of "Cause".. of the malady.
25 January 2024
- 11:3911:39, 25 January 2024 diff hist +246 Free indirect speech →Description: copy-edits, explicating the interpretation of the 3 'types of speeches' panel> BOLDED those features that change in shifting from Direct speech, to Normal indirect speech, to Free indirect speech.
24 January 2024
- 20:5020:50, 24 January 2024 diff hist +103 Free indirect speech copy-edits: revised narrative description in summary/ lede.
- 13:2613:26, 24 January 2024 diff hist +17 Free indirect speech copy-edits: moved "Naming" text to section "Distinguishing marks..."; reorganized narrative-text in section "Distinguishing marks...".
23 January 2024
- 04:5604:56, 23 January 2024 diff hist +50 Free indirect speech →Distinguishing marks of free indirect speech: copy-edits for readability: re-composed print space> panel (of the 3 classes of speech) is re-positioned 'above' list-panel of descriptions.
22 January 2024
- 20:5820:58, 22 January 2024 diff hist +31 Free indirect speech copy-edits: provide link that elaborates meaning of coordinator(s) and their conjuncts.
- 17:0317:03, 22 January 2024 diff hist +49 Free indirect speech copy-edits for readability: rewrite the six descriptors of free indirect speech; revise section title.
21 January 2024
- 14:4514:45, 21 January 2024 diff hist +769 Free indirect speech added: Zora Neale Hurston's use of free indirect speech; 'new' paragraph.
18 January 2024
- 12:2312:23, 18 January 2024 diff hist −4 Province of Maryland new paragraph
- 12:2112:21, 18 January 2024 diff hist +197 Province of Maryland copy-edits for readability; elaborated re enslavement of Africans; (tag new pgr; kept pgr for cf. diffs).
- 00:4100:41, 18 January 2024 diff hist +325 Province of Maryland copy-edits: word choice & phrasing; approp. links.
17 January 2024
- 03:2203:22, 17 January 2024 diff hist +96 St. Mary's City, Maryland copy-edits for readability: re word choices; re repetitive 'and's' & 'also's' & other phrasing.
5 January 2024
- 16:4816:48, 5 January 2024 diff hist +2 Edmund Randolph →Early life: new paragraph.
- 16:4216:42, 5 January 2024 diff hist +67 Edmund Randolph c-e to clarify text /narrative /caption.
- 16:0616:06, 5 January 2024 diff hist +4 Edmund Randolph changed weights of subsection titles.
