User contributions for Fdes11
A user with 15 edits. Account created on 9 December 2022.
26 May 2024
- 06:3106:31, 26 May 2024 diff hist −131 m Noah Some parts of the Yi Samuel Chen section were wordy, odd, or hard to read. I have updated the paragraph to be more easily readable. I am confident in the edit, though I am worried I may have lost some information in attempting to simplify the very complex final sentence. current Tag: Visual edit
20 February 2024
- 08:4708:47, 20 February 2024 diff hist +17 m Lockean proviso That quote does not appear in paragraph 27, and (as far as I can find), does not appear anywhere near paragraph 27. I could not find where the former quote was actually found in Locke's Second Treatise, so I found the most similar phrasing and exchanged them. Now, it's from paragraph 33, where it actually says that quote. We should not lie about where quotes come from. Tag: Visual edit
15 December 2023
- 12:3512:35, 15 December 2023 diff hist −136 Treaty of London (1915) No edit summary Tags: Undo Reverted
22 September 2023
- 04:3304:33, 22 September 2023 diff hist −352 m Bosaso Changed population from 2,000,000 to the actual UN estimate of 164,906, and fixed the population density to reflect. Tag: Visual edit
3 January 2023
- 00:0500:05, 3 January 2023 diff hist +259 Talk:Political philosophy →"Monarchy" not a Good Description of Plato's Republic: Reply Tag: Reply
2 January 2023
- 11:3911:39, 2 January 2023 diff hist +388 Talk:Umar ibn Hafsun →Overly relying on one source?: new section Tag: New topic
- 11:3011:30, 2 January 2023 diff hist +20 Umar ibn Hafsun fixed a lot of the spelling and grammar mistakes that I found. Tag: Visual edit
18 December 2022
- 05:5205:52, 18 December 2022 diff hist −300 Hypothetical Axis victory in World War II changed some spellings and references that I felt could've been better written Tags: Visual edit Newcomer task Newcomer task: copyedit
13 December 2022
- 14:4714:47, 13 December 2022 diff hist +8 m Timaeus of Locri phrasing (from "in Plato" to "in Plato's works") Tag: Visual edit
- 06:3106:31, 13 December 2022 diff hist −41 Euthyphro There were a few misspellings and ways that sentences could've been said better (in my opinion). Sentences that were overly long were shortened with (hopefully) their meaning preserved. Helping the reader understand the text. Perhaps look over the changes I made and make sure that the meaning is not overly changed. Tag: Visual edit
11 December 2022
- 04:0104:01, 11 December 2022 diff hist +45 Merethe Lindstrøm I just fixed a few of the things I thought were subjective, as well as rewriting a few parts to be more clear. Tags: Visual edit Newcomer task Newcomer task: copyedit
9 December 2022
- 16:1416:14, 9 December 2022 diff hist +66 m Talk:Political philosophy →"Monarchy" not a Good Description of Plato's Republic
- 06:4406:44, 9 December 2022 diff hist +476 Talk:Political philosophy →"Monarchy" not a Good Description of Plato's Republic
- 04:5604:56, 9 December 2022 diff hist +34 m Political philosophy Under Ancient Greece section, it says that Plato describes five states of ancient greece. That doesn't happen in Republic, he describes five possible types of government. Also I replaced "monarchy" with "republic" (see talk for my discussion) which I felt was closer to what Plato was advocating for and has less of the connotations and denotations that "monarchy" has. I made "republic" link to the Plato's Republic article since I don't know of a better one. Maybe has to be changed at some point. Tag: Visual edit
- 04:4104:41, 9 December 2022 diff hist +2,599 Talk:Political philosophy →"Monarchy" not a Good Description of Plato's Republic: new section Tag: New topic
