User contributions for Deluno
A user with 87 edits. Account created on 11 November 2011.
24 November 2012
- 03:1703:17, 24 November 2012 diff hist +660 Talk:Salman Rushdie →Simple English Wikipedia article on Salman Rushdie needs attention: new section
- 03:0403:04, 24 November 2012 diff hist +207 m Talk:Salman Rushdie →Atheist?
3 June 2012
- 14:3114:31, 3 June 2012 diff hist −213 Talk:New standard tuning →Incorrect octave shown in notation
- 13:2613:26, 3 June 2012 diff hist +236 Talk:New standard tuning →Incorrect octave shown in notation: new section
28 May 2012
- 15:4815:48, 28 May 2012 diff hist +115 m Underground music Language edit and slight elaboration.
21 May 2012
- 20:5720:57, 21 May 2012 diff hist −534 Religious fanaticism →Features: I removed words clearly presenting religious beliefs as though true, particularly those on religious fanaticism as "demonic". This whole section seems based on Christian rather than scientific e.g. psychological source.
28 April 2012
- 01:5101:51, 28 April 2012 diff hist +685 User:Deluno No edit summary current
27 April 2012
- 08:2708:27, 27 April 2012 diff hist +28 User:Deluno →Deluno
- 08:2208:22, 27 April 2012 diff hist +63 User:Deluno →Deluno
- 08:1708:17, 27 April 2012 diff hist +211 User:Deluno →Deluno
- 08:1108:11, 27 April 2012 diff hist +1,542 N User:Deluno Some rambling thoughts to begin the page. Not expecting visitors, but just in case. Intended to be edited & improved.
- 06:0806:08, 27 April 2012 diff hist +747 User:Deluno/The Craft of Musical Composition →(Introduction)
- 05:0105:01, 27 April 2012 diff hist −594 User:Deluno/The Craft of Musical Composition →(Introduction)
- 04:5804:58, 27 April 2012 diff hist +1,547 User:Deluno/The Craft of Musical Composition →(Introduction)
- 04:1304:13, 27 April 2012 diff hist +929 User:Deluno/The Craft of Musical Composition →The Craft of Musical Composition
- 03:5603:56, 27 April 2012 diff hist +2 m Reharmonization Language tweak
26 April 2012
- 05:0005:00, 26 April 2012 diff hist +284 m Paul Hindemith →Hindemith's musical system: A little more detail added. Main intention however was to correct final sentence of paragraph to remove the perhaps implicit suggestion that placement of his own work aside other historic figures presumed equality.
- 03:5003:50, 26 April 2012 diff hist −23 User:Deluno/The Craft of Musical Composition →Chapter I: Introductory
- 03:4903:49, 26 April 2012 diff hist +1,364 User:Deluno/The Craft of Musical Composition →Chapter I: Introductory
- 03:4103:41, 26 April 2012 diff hist +1,712 User:Deluno/The Craft of Musical Composition →The Craft of Musical Composition
- 03:1803:18, 26 April 2012 diff hist +653 N User:Deluno/The Craft of Musical Composition Just a starting point for further development & correction.
- 02:3902:39, 26 April 2012 diff hist −7 m Difference and Repetition →IV. Ideational Synthesis of Difference: Language edit to improve clarity & understandability. Particularly, "Organismic", an unnecessary, pompous word here, replaced with "Its", re an organism..
25 April 2012
- 03:3203:32, 25 April 2012 diff hist +4 m Paul Hindemith →Hindemith's musical system: I put double square brackets around title of book, to start an article on it. I hope this is the right way.
24 April 2012
- 15:4515:45, 24 April 2012 diff hist +113 m Talk:The Cure discography →Japanese Whispers
- 15:3515:35, 24 April 2012 diff hist +276 m Reharmonization →Chord substitution: Clarification by slight elaboration, and reference added.
- 15:2115:21, 24 April 2012 diff hist +13 m Reharmonization →Chord substitution: It's incorrect to state it as "the" dominant chord a tritone away, since the substitution alters the diatonic mode. I've also stated its location more specifically, above the tonic.
- 01:3601:36, 24 April 2012 diff hist +148 Talk:The Cure discography →Japanese Whispers
- 01:2401:24, 24 April 2012 diff hist +80 Talk:The Cure discography →Japanese Whispers
- 01:1901:19, 24 April 2012 diff hist +13 Talk:The Cure discography →Japanese Whispers
- 01:1701:17, 24 April 2012 diff hist +25 Talk:The Cure discography →Japanese Whispers
- 01:1501:15, 24 April 2012 diff hist +565 Talk:The Cure discography →Japanese Whispers
22 April 2012
- 10:3210:32, 22 April 2012 diff hist +2 Talk:The Cure discography →Japanese Whispers
- 10:3010:30, 22 April 2012 diff hist −2 Talk:The Cure discography →Japanese Whispers
- 10:2910:29, 22 April 2012 diff hist +78 Talk:The Cure discography →Japanese Whispers
- 10:2810:28, 22 April 2012 diff hist +1,110 Talk:The Cure discography →Japanese Whispers
21 April 2012
- 11:4011:40, 21 April 2012 diff hist +55 m Underground music More minor edits to language (not content), also including attempts to improve the general tone as apt for an encyclopedia.
- 11:2611:26, 21 April 2012 diff hist −7 m Underground music Some minor changes to sentence structure, especially in the first paragraphs. Language edit only, not content.
18 April 2012
- 03:4503:45, 18 April 2012 diff hist −277 m Problem →Examples: Removed irrelevant material which doesn't contribute to the article, and really weakens it.
9 April 2012
- 13:3813:38, 9 April 2012 diff hist +646 Talk:Getting Things Done →Please restore description of methodology, please. Do not limit access to information
- 05:1605:16, 9 April 2012 diff hist +33 m Drum rudiment →Historical organization (Standard 26 American Drum Rudiments): Making names of the 13 essentials listed here consistent with their names in the above table: double stroke open roll, drag (half drag or ruff), Single Drag Tap. ...
31 March 2012
18 January 2012
- 03:0903:09, 18 January 2012 diff hist +98 Talk:LilyPond →Simpler example needed: new section
6 January 2012
- 02:1602:16, 6 January 2012 diff hist +1,010 Wikipedia:Editor assistance/Requests →Not the place for preaching--Non-neutral material in "Glossolalia" article: new section
5 January 2012
- 04:1204:12, 5 January 2012 diff hist +782 Talk:Theories of humor →Merge Laughter in literature into this article?
- 03:5703:57, 5 January 2012 diff hist 0 m Theories of humor Minor language edit : on the words "instances" & "cases" re examples of humor
- 03:5503:55, 5 January 2012 diff hist +3 m Theories of humor language
- 03:5203:52, 5 January 2012 diff hist −6 m Theories of humor Intro paragraph split into 2 separate paragraphs, & minor language edit.
- 03:4903:49, 5 January 2012 diff hist +3 m Theories of humor sentence rearranged to improve flow
- 03:4803:48, 5 January 2012 diff hist +5 m Theories of humor reference fixed & superfluous repetition of same word removed.
- 03:4503:45, 5 January 2012 diff hist +2,386 Theories of humor Some gaps filled in (with references), eg on 3 major theories of humor, & relief theory. Sections rearranged to make more logical & fitting with the content of the article.
