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15 March 2024

• 17:4617:46, 15 March 2024 diff hist +760‎ Talk:John von Neumann ‎ →‎en.excessively-techni-pedia.org: new section Tag: New topic

28 November 2023

• 14:1514:15, 28 November 2023 diff hist +86‎ Makuya ‎ Adding religious ideology. Tags: Visual edit Mobile edit Mobile web edit

22 August 2023

• 10:2310:23, 22 August 2023 diff hist −832‎ Infinity Ward ‎ Undid revision 1171596358 by 2601:406:8580:1A90:F829:41D2:5760:B6DB (talk) ~~~~ Tag: Undo

8 May 2023

• 11:3311:33, 8 May 2023 diff hist −98‎ Inner German border ‎ Removed "It marked the boundary between two ideological systems – capitalism and communism." Declaring, without sources, that either West or East Germany represented ideal types of two nebulous ideologies that have been varied in their implementation through history is not good factual writing.

27 November 2022

• 18:5818:58, 27 November 2022 diff hist −96‎ Marxism–Leninism ‎ Removed "Marxist-Leninists oppose liberal democracy, anarchism, fascism and imperialism." It is unsourced, which seems necessary for a general statement. ~~~~ Tag: Reverted

22 November 2022

• 10:0510:05, 22 November 2022 diff hist +1‎ Andreas Wisniewski ‎ Changed "one of Hans Gruber's henchmen, Tony, ''Die Hard'', in 1988." to "one of Hans Gruber's henchmen, Tony, in 1998's ''Die Hard''." Just a little grammar clean-up. ~~~~

2 October 2022

• 08:4308:43, 2 October 2022 diff hist −3‎ An Essay on Marxian Economics ‎ Joan Robinson wrote this essay, not Joan G. Robinson. Joan Robinson's middle initial was V., for Violet. ~~~~ Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit

30 August 2022

• 09:1809:18, 30 August 2022 diff hist −4‎ Sons of Iraq ‎ Undid nonsense revision 1105992172 by 2A01:11DF:37E:C200:4480:3C10:BF60:41AA (talk) ~~~~ Tag: Undo

2 May 2022

• 17:1217:12, 2 May 2022 diff hist −83‎ Prefab Sprout ‎ Removed "Frontman Paddy McAloon is regarded as one of the great songwriters of his time." This isn't sourced, nor does it seem impartial. ~~~~ Tag: Reverted

28 April 2022

• 18:0518:05, 28 April 2022 diff hist −16‎ Bridge of Sighs ‎ →‎In culture: Removed the odd Diane Lane reference from a link to a film. ~~~~

26 April 2022

• 16:4916:49, 26 April 2022 diff hist −1‎ Growth platforms ‎ Removed extraneous line break above summary. ~~~~ current
• 16:4816:48, 26 April 2022 diff hist −1,025‎ Growth platforms ‎ Removed a section detailing the etymology of the words "growth" and "platform." A bizarrely unnecessary section. ~~~~ Tag: section blanking

3 April 2022

• 13:3413:34, 3 April 2022 diff hist +193‎ N Talk:The Holy Trinity (horology) ‎ A recommendation for deletion.

26 November 2021

• 13:1713:17, 26 November 2021 diff hist −180‎ Joseph Stiglitz ‎ →‎Views on free trade: Removed " Yet in 2017, while noting the wage crises and deindustrialization caused by globalization and free trade, he continues to promote free trade in the United States.<ref name=":1" />" This is illogical: Stiglitz is noted as being against a neoliberal handling of free trade, not against all free trade itself. The sentence feels like a smear — as does its containing section in general. ~~~~

11 November 2021

• 06:5706:57, 11 November 2021 diff hist −13‎ The French House, Soho ‎ →‎History: Removed "Calum, Rosie," from the list of regulars. No surnames, unsourced. Pretty obviously a prank. Cleaning up. ~~~~

13 September 2021

• 16:0816:08, 13 September 2021 diff hist −40‎ Amba (condiment) ‎ Correction of nationality. Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit

20 July 2021

• 08:4908:49, 20 July 2021 diff hist −108‎ Pamela Anderson ‎ →‎Julian Assange: Removed "During her visit to Australia, she also filmed a television commercial for Australian brand Ultra Tune." It has no relevance to the material on Assange, which is the subject of the section. The trivia is merely reported in the same source quoted on relevant material re: Anderson and Assange. I kept the references intact as they relate to the rest of the paragraph's section-relevant information. ~~~~

6 June 2021

• 20:4420:44, 6 June 2021 diff hist +777‎ Talk:Alexis de Tocqueville ‎ →‎This article is a mess.: new section

17 May 2021

• 10:1810:18, 17 May 2021 diff hist +617‎ Equality and Human Rights Commission ‎ →‎Labour Party: Added "The report noted that it had not reviewed all the evidence presented to it by the Labour party before reaching its conclusions.", with reference to the EHRC report itself, on page 5. ~~~~ Tag: Reverted
• 09:5409:54, 17 May 2021 diff hist +5‎ Equality and Human Rights Commission ‎ →‎Labour Party: As before, changed "found" to "determined." ~~~~
• 09:5309:53, 17 May 2021 diff hist +4‎ Equality and Human Rights Commission ‎ →‎Labour Party: Changed "finding" to "determining," because "finding" implies that the EHRC discovered objective facts, which is not the EHRC's remit — its remit is to weight in subjectively on any discrimination that has been reported to have occurred. ~~~~

27 April 2021

• 14:0714:07, 27 April 2021 diff hist +1‎ Get Your Wings ‎ Jack Douglas was responsible for Aerosmith's next three albums (#3, #4, #5) according to the sourced page for album #6, "Night in the Ruts." This page originally said "next four albums." Fixed now. ~~~~ Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit

13 April 2021

• 12:5612:56, 13 April 2021 diff hist −693‎ Gina Rinehart ‎ →‎Business career: I removed the content that begins with "Of course that doesn’t realize the enormous amount of work that went into exploring, achieving government approvals, studies, achieving financial markets, and construction, and now one mega mine, four major mines,several smaller mines." and on to the paragraph's end. It's unsourced and it's poorly written: it reads as apologism. Edit was by 2001:8004:2741:D60:A11F:9C23:9F29:FDE9 , who is partially blocked for abuse.

8 December 2020

• 11:2411:24, 8 December 2020 diff hist +4‎ The Corporation (2003 film) ‎ →‎Critical reception: I italicised "in the name," to draw attention to the surrounding argument's logical construction.

23 October 2020

• 10:1110:11, 23 October 2020 diff hist +35‎ Office ‎ →‎Japan 20th century office: This whole section makes outlandish qualitative claims with few to no references. I added the "More citations needed" template. ~~~~

15 July 2020

• 19:0119:01, 15 July 2020 diff hist +442‎ Talk:Berlin Crisis of 1961 ‎ →‎Lucius Clay POV: new section

12 July 2020

• 10:1910:19, 12 July 2020 diff hist −59‎ Mohammad Alavi (game developer) ‎ →‎Biography: I changed subtly jingoistic writing like calling Iran Alavi's "homeland," and the qualifier "despite enjoying his life [in the United States]." It read as subtly bitter and bigoted before; hopefully it reads as a little more objective now. ~~~~

11 May 2020

• 11:1911:19, 11 May 2020 diff hist +60‎ Jellyfish (band) ‎ →‎Formation: Changed text indicating that Manning contributed only to music, adding detail indicating that Manning contributed to the arrangement, as noted in provided source. ~~~~
• 11:1611:16, 11 May 2020 diff hist −84‎ Jellyfish (band) ‎ →‎Formation: Removed " Sturmer would also contribute fully-formed songs of his own.<ref name="jambands" />" because there's nothing in the reference to indicate this. ~~~~

12 April 2020

• 14:0614:06, 12 April 2020 diff hist −33‎ Tom Ford ‎ Removed graffiti: "He is president of the juggalos." Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit

2 October 2019

• 08:4408:44, 2 October 2019 diff hist −24‎ Inglourious Basterds ‎ Removed the needless "- both starring DiCaprio" from the introduction.