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13 February 2009
- 14:2214:22, 13 February 2009 diff hist −121 Vitamin C and the common cold removing issues tag for now; but it could still use some copyediting, as well more thorough examination of sources and organization.
- 14:1614:16, 13 February 2009 diff hist −81 Vitamin C and the common cold "common cold study" section is not distinct from the rest of the article, consolidating
- 14:1214:12, 13 February 2009 diff hist −984 Vitamin C and the common cold replacing lead with "Vitamin C Benefits" section. general information about Vitamin C is not needed in this article, and the lead was poorly written in general (comes off as a sales pitch).
- 14:0714:07, 13 February 2009 diff hist +4 Vitamin C and the common cold →Sources of Vitamin C
- 14:0714:07, 13 February 2009 diff hist −722 Vitamin C and the common cold →Dosage: again, better information appears in main Vitamin C article
- 14:0314:03, 13 February 2009 diff hist −440 Vitamin C and the common cold →Sources of Vitamin C: list of sources is unnecessary, and much less thorough than the one already at Vitamin C article/
- 14:0114:01, 13 February 2009 diff hist −615 Vitamin C and the common cold Nutrabio mentions studies but gives no reference. Source is unverifiable (and also suspect due to conflict of interest - website sells vitamin supplements)
- 02:4802:48, 13 February 2009 diff hist −92 ProDG (software) rm unsource material about crashes
19 January 2009
- 09:0209:02, 19 January 2009 diff hist +6 Mirror's Edge →Reception: edge magazine has no citation