User contributions for 174.62.69.11

13 May 2013

• 20:3820:38, 13 May 2013 diff hist +5‎ Gallipoli campaign ‎ →‎Early battles: Ugh, the paragraph starting with AE2 needs grammatical repair; there's no topic sentence nor reference to what the AE2 is aside from blind context. Bad bad bad.

9 May 2013

• 22:4722:47, 9 May 2013 diff hist +475‎ Talk:Women-are-wonderful effect ‎ →‎Importance?: new section

7 May 2013

• 21:4721:47, 7 May 2013 diff hist +316‎ Talk:Anita Sarkeesian ‎ →‎Anti-kickstarter: new section

5 May 2013

• 07:2707:27, 5 May 2013 diff hist 0‎ Assata Shakur ‎ →‎Medical evidence: Compound compound compound sentences FTL. Just use a period if it works, not more commas.
• 07:2207:22, 5 May 2013 diff hist −3‎ Assata Shakur ‎ →‎Jury: Grammar. Simpler sentences are better when they use the same words.
• 05:4105:41, 5 May 2013 diff hist −4‎ Assata Shakur ‎ →‎Witnesses: Clearer with a paragraph break here, fixed some grammar, removed extraneous number. It's clear as mud, but at least grammatically unbroken.

1 May 2013

• 23:2823:28, 1 May 2013 diff hist +278‎ Category talk:American novelists ‎ →‎Preferred gender classification style

29 April 2013

• 09:0409:04, 29 April 2013 diff hist +8‎ Plus sizing ‎ →‎Disadvantages

28 April 2013

• 08:1008:10, 28 April 2013 diff hist −1‎ John Rhys-Davies ‎ →‎Personal life: Grammar; have -> had

27 April 2013

• 03:4203:42, 27 April 2013 diff hist +352‎ Category talk:American women novelists ‎ →‎Terrible choice

23 April 2013

• 05:3405:34, 23 April 2013 diff hist +201‎ Kent State shootings ‎ This reference was weirdly removed by a 'bot last month for being broken...
• 05:1005:10, 23 April 2013 diff hist +705‎ Susana Martinez ‎ →‎2012: Added 2013, new item 'minimum wage'
• 04:3904:39, 23 April 2013 diff hist +195‎ Captain Underpants ‎ →‎Book bans: updated citation (it's on this year's list)

22 April 2013

• 19:3919:39, 22 April 2013 diff hist +328‎ Talk:Black Panther Party ‎ →‎Horowitz

19 April 2013

• 10:5110:51, 19 April 2013 diff hist +8‎ Ferret ‎ →‎Health: I've heard this, but never any detail...

18 April 2013

• 06:0506:05, 18 April 2013 diff hist +48‎ Sokal affair ‎ →‎Background: Irony should be noted. Some citations in this paragraph could be used.

15 April 2013

• 19:1219:12, 15 April 2013 diff hist +436‎ Talk:AT&T Corporation ‎ →‎Where's the 90's lawsuit that forced AT&T Broadband to be sold off?: new section
• 19:0719:07, 15 April 2013 diff hist +623‎ Talk:AT&T ‎ →‎Intro is misleading: new section
• 07:1107:11, 15 April 2013 diff hist +422‎ Wikipedia talk:WikiProject Telecommunications ‎ →‎Bands/protocols: new section

13 April 2013

• 00:3700:37, 13 April 2013 diff hist +398‎ Talk:Gun violence in the United States ‎ →‎Suicides involving guns section: new section
• 00:3300:33, 13 April 2013 diff hist +16‎ Gun violence in the United States ‎ →‎Suicides involving firearms: Kleck isn't a neutral source.

12 April 2013

• 19:4619:46, 12 April 2013 diff hist +411‎ Wikipedia:Articles for deletion/Kermit Gosnell ‎No edit summary
• 05:0905:09, 12 April 2013 diff hist +476‎ Talk:2008 California Proposition 8 ‎ →‎Bad neutrality:
• 04:4904:49, 12 April 2013 diff hist +409‎ Talk:2008 California Proposition 8 ‎ →‎RfC: the term "traditional marriage" is not neutral when used in U.S.-specific context
• 04:4404:44, 12 April 2013 diff hist +538‎ Talk:2008 California Proposition 8 ‎ →‎Bad neutrality:: new section
• 04:2904:29, 12 April 2013 diff hist +1‎ Dreyfus affair ‎ →‎Political Context

10 April 2013

• 23:3823:38, 10 April 2013 diff hist +392‎ Talk:Rand Paul ‎ →‎NBO - not neutral source: new section

4 April 2013

• 07:0007:00, 4 April 2013 diff hist +11‎ Samurai Jack ‎ →‎Home video releases
• 06:5906:59, 4 April 2013 diff hist +292‎ Samurai Jack ‎ →‎Home video releases: Is it better to link to a random news site or netflix? So confusing...

3 April 2013

• 03:4103:41, 3 April 2013 diff hist +68‎ Talk:USS Guardian (MCM-5) ‎ →‎Contact AFTER grounding

1 April 2013

• 20:0120:01, 1 April 2013 diff hist +82‎ Sterling Optical ‎No edit summary
• 19:5819:58, 1 April 2013 diff hist +188‎ Talk:Sight for Sore Eyes ‎ →‎Disambiguation: new section

28 March 2013

• 23:2723:27, 28 March 2013 diff hist +339‎ Talk:DuPont (1802–2017) ‎ →‎Environment: new section

27 March 2013

• 19:3119:31, 27 March 2013 diff hist +425‎ Talk:SaveCalifornia.com ‎ →‎Citation to their own articles?: new section

12 March 2013

• 05:2405:24, 12 March 2013 diff hist +8‎ Soft drink ‎No edit summary

22 February 2013

• 19:2219:22, 22 February 2013 diff hist +26‎ Kent State shootings ‎ →‎Legal action against the guardsmen and others: Citation already given... Dunno why the tag wasn't pulled. It's not like FBI reports en mass are known for their accuracy.
• 19:1419:14, 22 February 2013 diff hist +19‎ Kent State shootings ‎ →‎Aftermath and long-term effects: <- Not that it's dubious, but there really should be a citation here!

19 February 2013

• 08:4408:44, 19 February 2013 diff hist +318‎ Talk:The Presidents of the United States of America (band) ‎No edit summary