Talk:2018 EFL League Two play-off final/GA1
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Reviewer: Kosack (talk · contribs) 16:29, 8 August 2020 (UTC)
I'll pick this one up. Will post review as soon as possible. Kosack (talk) 16:29, 8 August 2020 (UTC)
Infobox[edit]
- Does "final" need capitalising in the infobox heading?
- Perhaps it's worth including the temperature mentioned in the summary in the weather field here? Hot and sunny seems a little informal.
Lead[edit]
- "The top three teams of the 2017–18 EFL League Two season gained automatic promotion to the Championship", think they've skipped a level there.
- "the teams placed from fourth to seventh place", slightly repetitive with the placed/place usage especially considering it's used two more times soon after. Perhaps simply drop the second use in this sentence?
- "After goalless first half" > a goalless?
- Use Paul Tisdale's full name and link in the third paragraph.
Route to the final[edit]
- "disallowed five minute"> five minutes
First half[edit]
- "but Jordan Storey's tackled on McNulty", a bit muddled here.
- "the half was brought to goalless end" > a goalless.
Second half[edit]
- "through Jordan Willis. Willis turned", slightly repetitive with the double use of Willis here.
References[edit]
- Refs are all well formatted and a quick spot check for accuracy comes back OK.
A couple of minor points to address above but a nice piece of work all in all. Placed on hold while these are looked at. Kosack (talk) 17:52, 8 August 2020 (UTC)
- Kosack lovely, thanks. I've addressed all these concerns now, please let me know if there's anything else. Cheers. The Rambling Man (Hands! Face! Space!!!!) 18:09, 8 August 2020 (UTC)